Flat plan Feedback

I asked two teenagers aged 16 and 17 to feedback their thoughts on my magazine. My two respondents gave me feedback on what they liked, what stood out to them as well as what I could improve. I have included podcasts for the responses below using Soundcloud.

Nawal
Front Cover Feedback



I asked My 17 year old what she liked about my front cover as well as improvements. She said that the liked 'the use of colour' on the front page as well as the fact that 'the text was not covering the image'.Nawal also stated she liked the fact that the image was 'bold'.
Below I have embedded the podcast of Nawal saying her thoughts on what she liked as well as improvements.

Contents Page Feedback


I also asked Nawal what she liked and disliked about my contents page as well as what I could do to improve. She responded by saying that it 'looks professional'. But she feels that it looks like theirs a lot on the page. An improvement that Nawal said, was that I need to 'add colour as it's an important thing'

Double Page Spread Feedback

Lastly I asked Nawal what she liked and disliked about my contents page and also what improvements I could make. Nawal said she 'likes the layout' but an improvement would be 'adding more colour'.


Lauresha's Feedback 
I asked Lauresha who is 16 what her response was to my magazine front cover, contents page and double page spread.Below I have included Podcasts on Lauresha's responses.

Front Cover Feedback
Lauresha liked the fact that 'everything is in bold and catches your eyes easier'. Lauresha also liked Lauresha also noticed that the number 21 is now apart of teenagers memories due to the Vine website/app that uploads humorous videos.( listen to the podcast for Lauresha to explain the vine)

Contents Page Feedback



Lauresha said she liked 'how it is separated into sections' as she could tell what is what. she also noticed how the page numbers are in bold which makes her know the distinction between each box.


Double Page Spread Feedback 

Lauresha liked how 'there is a picture on one side and text on the other' she also decontructed the double page spread and said how 'the bold heading attracts the attention of the reader'.



Through asking Nawal and Lauresha it made me realise that my magazine appeals to both of them so far and that my biggest improvement would be ensuring that there's enough colour on the pages. As well as trying to make sure it doesn't look too overcrowded.